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Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Expressive

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model :iconmoijoie:



grand central station
nyc

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*dana-martinez Jun 7, 2009, 5:43:40 PM
Nice! It looks so bright and clean... I love that the red on the train and the red of her umbrella match... I like the composition (although if she were a bit further back and you a bit more toward the train, it might emphasize the distance between her and the person she is presumably waving at). I also like the dressy outfit she is in - as if she'd been on a date with the person leaving. The one and only complaint, if that's what it is, is that her waving arm is quite stiff. It's more of a salute than a wave... A more delicate, relaxed hand could convey so much... for that matter, a foot forward would, also.
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`davincipoppalag Jun 6, 2009, 8:13:09 PM
Interesting idea..well executed DAve

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=existentialdefiance Jun 6, 2009, 8:25:31 PM
This is a really cool shot - well done :salute:
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*billyunderscorebwa Jun 6, 2009, 8:35:26 PM
Wow! Excellent concept. Really fantastic capture :thumbsup:

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=DennisChunga Jun 6, 2009, 8:45:48 PM
nice dave. great color choices and exposure time

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~the-Power-of-One Jun 6, 2009, 9:25:19 PM
this is stunning! the colours fit together perfectly :D
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=WildWinyan Jun 6, 2009, 9:34:42 PM
Wonderful!

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~FanArtistik Jun 6, 2009, 10:30:30 PM
This picture have an interesting perspective also a good angle of view with nice details and a good illumination. Pretty model.
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~deviantdit Jun 6, 2009, 10:54:58 PM
what a great color..
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=dwk61 Jun 6, 2009, 10:59:17 PM
Great shot Dave :)
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Jun 5, 2009, 3:32:16 PM

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